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rachel marie patterson / 3rd place editors' choice prize in poetry

  • Jul 11, 2024
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Honeymoon With Global Warming

We turned up late to the Anchor Motel

with no reservation. Back then, we believed 

our bodies would never grow tired, 

that we could float on love alone. 

The next day, we trekked across a bay 

in flip-flops and jeans. We chose to see

the rising tide as adventure, not proof 

of a doomed planet. Before we had children 

to think of instead, we hiked too far, 

too close to dusk, the iron rungs 

on the cliff face slick and cold. 

At the summit, purple asters rose 

into ether. We talked about all the time

there’d be – the red house, the swinging 

gate, the dog. We imagined a home that might

withstand disaster, then descended 

through vanishing flowers, the twilight 

hours falling faster than we knew.


Rachel Marie Patterson is the co-founder and editor of Radar Poetry. She holds an M.F.A. in Poetry from UNC Greensboro. Her poems have appeared in Valparaiso Poetry Review, Harpur Palate, Smartish Pace, The National Poetry Review, Cumberland River Review, Thrush, and many other journals. Rachel's work has been nominated for Best of the Net, Best New Poets, and the Pushcart Prize. She is the author of the poetry collection Tall Grass With Violence (FutureCycle Press, 2022). Learn more at rachelmariepatterson.com.

19 Comments


Lily Wilson
Lily Wilson
14 hours ago

A beautifully written poem that captures the connection between love, adventure, and the changing world around us. The vivid nature imagery reminds me of journeys like the EBC Heli Tour, where travelers witness the breathtaking beauty of the Himalayas while reflecting on the importance of protecting our planet’s incredible landscapes.

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A beautifully written poem that balances love, memory, and the quiet reality of a changing world. Its powerful imagery reminds me that places like Mount Everest also reflect both nature's timeless beauty and the importance of protecting our planet. Congratulations to Rachel Marie Patterson on this well-deserved recognition.

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The poem gently shows how feelings and memories remain with us even as life moves forward. It also reminds us of the Annapurna Base Camp, where each mountain trail creates a quiet space to reflect, enjoy nature, and value the importance of preserving these beautiful Himalayan landscapes.

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The poem paints a touching picture of how emotions and memories stay with us as life changes. Reading it also brings to mind the Everest View Trail, where every mountain path offers a peaceful setting to reflect, appreciate nature, and understand why protecting these beautiful landscapes matters so much.

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This poem beautifully captures the connection between love, memories, and the changing world around us. It reminds me of journeys like the Gokyo Lake Trek, where the beauty of nature inspires reflection while reminding us to protect these fragile landscapes for the future.

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