rachel marie patterson / 3rd place editors' choice prize in poetry
- Jul 11, 2024
- 1 min read
Honeymoon With Global Warming
We turned up late to the Anchor Motel
with no reservation. Back then, we believed
our bodies would never grow tired,
that we could float on love alone.
The next day, we trekked across a bay
in flip-flops and jeans. We chose to see
the rising tide as adventure, not proof
of a doomed planet. Before we had children
to think of instead, we hiked too far,
too close to dusk, the iron rungs
on the cliff face slick and cold.
At the summit, purple asters rose
into ether. We talked about all the time
there’d be – the red house, the swinging
gate, the dog. We imagined a home that might
withstand disaster, then descended
through vanishing flowers, the twilight
hours falling faster than we knew.
Rachel Marie Patterson is the co-founder and editor of Radar Poetry. She holds an M.F.A. in Poetry from UNC Greensboro. Her poems have appeared in Valparaiso Poetry Review, Harpur Palate, Smartish Pace, The National Poetry Review, Cumberland River Review, Thrush, and many other journals. Rachel's work has been nominated for Best of the Net, Best New Poets, and the Pushcart Prize. She is the author of the poetry collection Tall Grass With Violence (FutureCycle Press, 2022). Learn more at rachelmariepatterson.com.




A beautifully written poem that captures the connection between love, adventure, and the changing world around us. The vivid nature imagery reminds me of journeys like the EBC Heli Tour, where travelers witness the breathtaking beauty of the Himalayas while reflecting on the importance of protecting our planet’s incredible landscapes.
A beautifully written poem that balances love, memory, and the quiet reality of a changing world. Its powerful imagery reminds me that places like Mount Everest also reflect both nature's timeless beauty and the importance of protecting our planet. Congratulations to Rachel Marie Patterson on this well-deserved recognition.
The poem gently shows how feelings and memories remain with us even as life moves forward. It also reminds us of the Annapurna Base Camp, where each mountain trail creates a quiet space to reflect, enjoy nature, and value the importance of preserving these beautiful Himalayan landscapes.
The poem paints a touching picture of how emotions and memories stay with us as life changes. Reading it also brings to mind the Everest View Trail, where every mountain path offers a peaceful setting to reflect, appreciate nature, and understand why protecting these beautiful landscapes matters so much.
This poem beautifully captures the connection between love, memories, and the changing world around us. It reminds me of journeys like the Gokyo Lake Trek, where the beauty of nature inspires reflection while reminding us to protect these fragile landscapes for the future.